Wow i love it
Cool intro, cool synths, ok drum layout. Yes it's good, but i can see it has more potential.
A more aggresive drum layout, like an IDM drum layout. Raise the BPM a bit, and also clean your synths. EQ them a little more so theres no distortion and a little more stero enhancement. With that done, i would've though that the Crystal Method did this song, seriously. It's that good.
stay up
-Allen aka LeN
I wish there was an overall score of 9.9
Because this track is beyond what i was expecting. With that said, i do have some suggestions to make it better.
I would boost the treble .5dB more, maybe it was my headphones but i thought it could use just a bit more of it. Also near the end of the track, the melody you used with the saw synth, you changed the octave, kinda didnt feel right. I think you know which one im talking about, it was just out of tune for me. Apart from that, send it to get some professinal mixing and mastering, and i can see this track at the top of the charts of its gerne.
-Allen aka LeN
It's Good
Wouldn't classify it as techno, more like alt hip hop. you seems to be very creative with the drums [i hope those are not samples, well even if they are, good use of them] What you need to work on i see [alot] is your mixing and mastering technique. Every good producer has his own style and sound when it comes to mixing and mastering, its very clear from the song that u still need to find your voice. Keep working at it.
Thanks. usually I can't really classify my own stuff since I dont really fit into most of the genre's however thanks for the review. That song got rushed by a friend of mine since he liked it so much and I put it together in a 10 minute rush since he needed then and there. so i'll work on my mixing and no the drums were not samples. I made the song from scratch using Reason.
Wow....
Hey, its Allen A, you reviewd me and im giving the favor back. So....this song, i mean i didnt even know that there was an idustrial section in thr ng audio page but i guess i should come more often cuz this song is killer. i love the intro, kinda had a weak ending but since i dont listen to alot of indrustrial (just stick to trance house and techno)i wont critize you much. But yea i can see how much you put into this. im giving you a 4/5.
-Allen
The ending isn't a crowd-pleaser as I'm noticing, so I'll have to work on slicing sounds, because I've got an idea to kick this song back into action : )
-SuperDrummer146
Very 80-ish
I feel like im watching some 80s show. I like it, specially the arpeggio bass.
Come check me out and review my stuff
-llennnn
Its alright, just that...
Why is it playing on the left side only? Apart from that, its a really strong beat.
-llennnn
im havin problems with my equipment which is really frustrating, seems to only record on the left side, but hope to fix it soon. thanks for the good review
Haha i know this
You did mess up the notes at the end, but i guess thats just to put your own spin on things. good job man, i like the bass drums.
-Allen
Hmm, did i mess up? oh well, thats how i learned it, and i like the way it came out lol, i wanted to do a pretty unique remix and i did ^^ Thanks for reviewing!
lawl
nice man. very true, and very funny. beat couldve been better though.
Two words
Shit's tight
-Allen
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You put my work to shame
I really like this tune + i wish i had that flute sound, because it sounds almost like a female voice saying ooooohhh!!! Im glad you made this, one thing though im not ok with is that to me it sounds more like a trance song as it goes on. The transitions or "build-ups" on this song were just too long. Just my opinion man, dont stress it. I still love it, make more, and do me a favor. review some of mine.
-llennnn
Sup, im Alan
Age 34, Male
DJ/Producer
Thomas Edison HS
Queens - NY
Joined on 4/17/04
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