Good but

Front page material? no. This was only a trailer with some fighting scenes of Pokemon. If this was 1999 maybe but now? someone made a mistake on choosing this for the front page. (no offense to your flash, it really does look great)

This is a big feat

Out of every piece of media online and off, this is the first that's actually MADE me LAUGH out loud, and i mean really laugh, in a loooong time. Usually when i hear soimething that's humorous i say to myself ha that's funny, but i NEVER laugh. The 2009 xmas special had me loling hard. 10/10!

It doesnt cut it for me

The jokes were stale, repetitive and in all very predictable. After the first couple of scenes i just lost interest. sorry, try changing the punch-line, not just make the character die over and over again.

Not bad

Takes a while to get the hang of, but in the end its an enjoyable game. Had some grammar errors: "and release for 50% warriors", you must have meant and release TO send 50% warriors.

Really good flash tutorial

Thanks for making something like this. Hopefully with you tips, i will make my first flash.

-Allen

well

it wa good, im not gonna lie. You need to work on it though, better graphics and sound. Damn that sound...anyway, good work.

where are the subs on this? its chaotic i like that, but needs some heavy bass.

your synth is killing me

For me, the track would have been great if the drums were looped at 1:06. That percussion works (the hats work too but i would have used a different one). But the melodies are too happy. I would have taken the piano and used only minor scale notes, and not too many because that clouds the rhythm and mood of the track, only some to give it flavor.

Also there is little bottom end. I would have introduced a deep phat kick with a sub bass line and ontop of that a some cut up vocals, maybe Jamaican? i think that works.

Still it's a great effort. All the stuff above is if i would be able to remix it, that's how i hear it better in my head. Then again i love making Dubstep related music, so i tend to hear most music with that twist. =D