Hey man, sounds very good
You know, at first when i heard the beggining i thought it was going to be more fast paced. Im telling you man, this would sound great as a DnB' piece. Like in the 5th bar, you could've added some type of thick bass on it, then advance to a fast drum DnB' pattern.
Well anyway, my real reason [other than to say how good the song is]was to tell you, that i'd like to remix it. Your ussing FL Studio right? you can log into the FL Collab and send me the file.
What do you say? ill give you credit for it, i just dont want to see that song stay like that, i think i can add some really good stuff to it, if you just let me. Send me back a comment if your want to do the collab.
-Allen